Shingeki No Kyojin : Aftermath

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Re: Shingeki No Kyojin : Aftermath

Postby Blackhunter » Thu Sep 26, 2013 6:31 pm

okay
can't waiiiit
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Re: Shingeki No Kyojin : Aftermath

Postby The Sketcher » Thu Sep 26, 2013 7:38 pm

I'll post them here when I get a chance.
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Re: Shingeki No Kyojin : Aftermath

Postby CrazyRay » Sat Sep 28, 2013 10:09 pm

Just read the first chapter and it looks nice, the intros and the characters aren't bad keep it up. Chapter Two should be good too
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Re: Shingeki No Kyojin : Aftermath

Postby crapcarp » Sun Sep 29, 2013 11:01 pm

Just read the first chapter, and it was pretty cool. A couple things bothered me, though. First, it was hard to tell what was going on. A little less sketchiness(for lack of a better term) and defining the lines more will work wonders.

Second, it was hard to read in certain places due to inconsistent letter sizes, sometimes they were too small or squeezed together in some places. I suggest using image software like Gimp or something and type the words(it's free, so no worries). Speaking of which, do NOT use Comic Sans to write it. Go to a font site like Blambot(google it) and use a font from there(a lot of them are free, I personally use and recommend Digital Strip).

Other than that, it was great. Looking forward to the next chapter. :D
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